When I first got the notification of the third assessment, I was terribly shocked and surprised because it is written that I have to make five pieces of academic writing. Since I am having trouble in writing good essays especially grammar and good structure, I feel so depressed but then I take it as a challenge for me and I’m excited to learn more.
I’m proud of my work especially my compare and contrast essay since I have collected five drafts to the teachers. I’ve made great effort to create a good essay. I tried my best to achieve my goals which is to get better mark than previous assessments. I enjoy working on this assessment.
I learned many things about Wi-Fi like its availability, cost and mobility. Now, I realized why many people prefer Wi-Fi than 3G. I also learned how to write a good essay especially about how to make a good essay organization and editing my grammar mistakes. I think that I have made good improvement after I learn about academic writing. I know how to make a good thesis and use more sophisticated words.
In the future, I will improve my knowledge about writing an essay. I will write more essays to create good essay. I will also read more to widen my vocabulary. I will also ask teachers to guide me to the right path.
Thanks to Ms. Laura and Mrs. Karla for guiding me and correcting my mistakes. Thanks to the authors of my resources since they provide me great information.
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