While learning about academic writing, I realize the fact that a piece of essay is really complicated. In order to get a better piece, I need to think for word choice, structure, and grammar. Without proper planning for the essay , there won’t any good essay.
Actually, in this assessment, I tried to make an essay without any proper planning before. Unexpectedly, there are so many mistakes including wordy and confusing structure in it, so I decided to remake the structure and do planning for my essay. Luckily, I am able to practice it from making the outline for partial essay. After I compare between my last essay and the new essay, I am able to make better structure and I can add more detail. Indeed, without proper planning, I won’t be able to improve that. I think I’m more confident for the essay than before.
Moreover my topic is video games. It’s a topic where I could enjoy in listening about it or talking about it. Of course I choose because I play it most of the time. When I do some research about my topic, I am surprised that video games also have development not only in graphics but also in their gameplay. For example, Ateiler Iris, in order to take action, there is a time for that. Before I do some research, I know it as RPG games, but actually it is a developed system for RPG games.
I am happy to do this assignment because its success to improve my knowledge in both ways, academic and gaming. I would like to see my improvement through the essay and that won’t happen without the help of my teacher at school. Thanks to Ms.Laura and Mrs.Karla for guiding me at school also in the extra course.
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