In this Assessment, I found that the task is very challenging. My topic is so hard yet it has to be explain in 4 pieces of writing. I know that my formal writing skills so bad and I can't think of a way to make my writings look good.
My topic is about a mobile phone feature which known as 3.5G system. I've learned a lot when I search about this topic and I know that this topic really suits me. I also learned that the topic of my portfolio is really interesting, because it's a really fast-growing technological system that really helps user in the whole world. By this third assessment I am also learned that to write an academic writing isn't easy, therefore I couldn't underestimate the task. I've learned that there are some rules that I must follow in order to make my writing looks good and understandable.
I am proud of my comparison and contrast of K660i and K630i piece, because I found that I most improved in that piece and I've learned many things on how to make a complete essay. The other thing is that I've collected 3 drafts and I see that the teachers said that I'm improved. In the other hand, I also learned so much about K660i which is my own mobile phone.
I'll improve more and more on my writing in the future by read books that have good english in it and try to practice english. I would also improve my writing skill by asking teachers or friends so that I could know my mistakes by their opinions. In the other hand my teachers taught me that we could learn or improve the writing skills by open an URL, http://owl.english.perdue.edu/. In the URL we can see how to fix grammatical mistakes and it quite helps for those who have weak english skills like myself.
I'm not sure to what failures have I done in writing but I know my successes. I succeeded on writing my complete essay well and I see my improvement really well in this assessment. I wouldn't succeeded if I'm listen to the teachers. I'm very grateful they've taught me well.
Special thanks to Ms.Laura Mail and Mrs.Karla McGrath
My topic is about a mobile phone feature which known as 3.5G system. I've learned a lot when I search about this topic and I know that this topic really suits me. I also learned that the topic of my portfolio is really interesting, because it's a really fast-growing technological system that really helps user in the whole world. By this third assessment I am also learned that to write an academic writing isn't easy, therefore I couldn't underestimate the task. I've learned that there are some rules that I must follow in order to make my writing looks good and understandable.
I am proud of my comparison and contrast of K660i and K630i piece, because I found that I most improved in that piece and I've learned many things on how to make a complete essay. The other thing is that I've collected 3 drafts and I see that the teachers said that I'm improved. In the other hand, I also learned so much about K660i which is my own mobile phone.
I'll improve more and more on my writing in the future by read books that have good english in it and try to practice english. I would also improve my writing skill by asking teachers or friends so that I could know my mistakes by their opinions. In the other hand my teachers taught me that we could learn or improve the writing skills by open an URL, http://owl.english.perdue.edu/. In the URL we can see how to fix grammatical mistakes and it quite helps for those who have weak english skills like myself.
I'm not sure to what failures have I done in writing but I know my successes. I succeeded on writing my complete essay well and I see my improvement really well in this assessment. I wouldn't succeeded if I'm listen to the teachers. I'm very grateful they've taught me well.
Special thanks to Ms.Laura Mail and Mrs.Karla McGrath
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